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The diagram below shows the process of getting a driving licence. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the process of getting a driving licence. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. Write at least 150 words.
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The diagram given depicts how a driving
license
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 is obtained in the US. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, there are six prominent stages, initiating with going to the register place
and
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apply
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to
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apply
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filling
some
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out some
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 forms and ending with getting the driving
license
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. Noticeably, there are several results if the candidates fail in different steps.
At
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In
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 the first
step
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 of the process, people need to go to the driving
license
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center
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 to fill in some conventional forms for registration, and
then
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 they will be able to take an eyesight test, which is the second
step
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. If their eyesight does not reach the standard, they will fail and can not get any
license
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.
On the other hand
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, if they pass, their third
step
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 will be paying fees to enable them to do the written
exam
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, which can test their insights about
traffic’s
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traffic
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 rules. From
this
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step
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, there are
two
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 circumstances for
two
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 discrepant results that the examinees get. In one case, they will turn to
do
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the road
exam
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 if their score in the previous
exam
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 is adequate.
However
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, unless they pass and get the driving
license
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, they have to pay fees and do those steps again, which means they only have one chance to do the reality testing.
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, in the paper
exam
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, the candidates have
two
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 more chances to retake it. If one of those
two
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 is completed, their next
step
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 will be the practical test
at
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on
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a
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the
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 road. But paying fees again is inevitable if they fail at both retake tests.
Then
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, the cycle starts again at the third
step
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 until people can get their driving
license
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words license, step, exam, two with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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