The maps below show the recent changes in the town of Kimsville.

The maps below show the recent changes in the town of Kimsville.
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The image depicts the modifications which have been made in Kimsville since 2002. At first glance,
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, there has been construction of a new transportation facility,
as well as
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, the replacement of some infrastructures with new residential buildings,
sport complex
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, and others,
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the green areas in the
city
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have decreased considerably. If we need to go into details, you’ll find the main changes in the south of the
city
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. The old cinema has been replaced with a new pub.
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, a new football stadium has been substituted with the woodland that had been located in the south-west of the
city
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.
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, the only update in the north of the
city
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is new apartments that have been replenished
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of grooves in the northwest of the
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. When it comes to east and west, a new software company
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over the old factory in the east of the
city
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centre.
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, a new train station has been instituted for
the
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passengers
on
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the west of the
city
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centre.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Contractions: Don't use contractions.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • residential development
  • transformation
  • industrial areas
  • housing estates
  • service-oriented economy
  • modern apartment complexes
  • amenities
  • transportation infrastructure
  • congestion
  • bicycle lanes
  • eco-friendly
  • accessibility
  • public spaces
  • recreational facilities
  • quality of life
  • vibrant community
  • leisure
  • exercise
  • social interaction
  • well-being
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