The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
The presented chart describes during every 30 days the quantity of percentage by
wich
the Correct your spelling
which
prize
of three different types of metals, copper, nickel and zinc, changed compared with the previous months.
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price
Overall
, all of the three lines, that represent the materials, have a fluctant variation, although
all began and ended the year with a positive difference of
their values.
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in
Futhermore
, nickel and zinc have a similar trend, in Correct your spelling
Furthermore
fact
they both present a thorough in June, of -3% and -1%Add a comma
fact,
,
and in October, of -2% and -1%, followed Remove the comma
apply
then
by an increase. Despite that, nickel has experienced in the month of January a consistent
bigger Change the word
consistently
risen
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rise
of
the prizes, by 6%, than zinc. Copper had a more steady Change preposition
in
changing
of its value on the market, despite a decrease Replace the word
change
by
-1% that lasted for 60 days starting from May. In conclusion, all of the prizes remained fully steady for 60 days until September, with a Change preposition
of
slighlty
decrease afterwards.Correct your spelling
slight
slightly
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