The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line chart illustrates the
number
of shop
closures
and openings
in one country between 2011 and 2018.
Overall
, the number
of shop
openings
fell significantly from around 8,500 to about 4,000 by 2015. Meanwhile, the number
of shop
closures
remained stable until 2014, before sharply dropping to just over 500 closures
in 2015.
After the significant drop in shop
openings
between 2011 and 2012, the number
began to rise, reaching just above 6,000 in 2014. However
, the number
of openings
dropped again to around 4,000 in 2015. From 2015 onward, shop
openings
remained relatively stable, ending 2018 with approximately 5,100 shops.
On the other hand
, the number
of shop
closures
remained relatively stable between 2011 and 2014, reaching just above 6,000 closures
in 2014. However
, the number
of closures
fell dramatically in 2015. Although
the number
began to rise again in 2016, reaching just above 5,000, it remained relatively stable thereafter
, ending 2018 with around 5,100 closures
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