The graph below show the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The line graph displays the data on changes in the prices of copper,
nickel
and zinc in
average for each month in 2014.
Change preposition
on
Overall
, the average price change per month experienced a decrease in June and October for all three metals, and the large gap of the figures across those metals had narrawed
by the end of the period.
In Correct your spelling
narrowed
narrated
Janarary
, Correct your spelling
January
Nickel
had the highest average monthly change in price, at ^%. By contrast
, that
data for zinc was only 1%, making it the lowest at Correct determiner usage
the
start
. Add an article
the start
However
, by the end of Feburary
, the two lines crossed since the monthly variation in prices of zinc had reached 2.5%, with a significant increase in Correct your spelling
February
Feburary
followed by a slight drop, and that percentage of Correct your spelling
February
nickel
largely declined to the same figure. From that time onwards, the average monthly variation of nickel
kepts
lagging behind the two others, Correct your spelling
kept
keeps
despites
all three metals Correct your spelling
despite
represented
a decrease in data in June and October, ending at 1% by December.
Meanwhile, copper showed a smaller variation in the percentages over 2014 Wrong verb form
representing
comparing
to the others, within only 3%.Wrong verb form
compared
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