The graph shows average annual percentages of online adults who use different social networks. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of online
adults
using six different social flaforms
( no Correct your spelling
platforms
flatforms
site
, one
site
, two sites
, three sites
, four sites
, five sites
) between 2014 and 2105.
Overall
, the percentag
of Correct your spelling
percentage
users
who used one
site
in both years given was the highest. Noticeably, the figures for adults
used
social networks Correct pronoun usage
who used
in
Change preposition
apply
was
higher than Correct subject-verb agreement
were
that
in 2015.
Correct determiner usage
those
Look
at the bar chart closer, we can see that about 36% Wrong verb form
Looking
users
who used Change preposition
of users
one
site
was
the highest, which was nearly 8% higher than the proportion of Change the verb form
were
adults
used
Correct pronoun usage
who used
one
site
in 2015. There was only 1
% higher Correct article usage
a 1
in
percentage of online Change preposition
apply
adults
used
no Correct pronoun usage
who used
site
in 2014 compared to the figure in 2015. Conversely
, 1%higher
in Correct article usage
a 1%higher
proportion
of Add an article
the proportion
a proportion
users
who used three site
was seen in 2104 and 2015.
in terms of the remains Change to a plural noun
sites
categise
, the percentage of internet Correct your spelling
categories
users
used
three Correct pronoun usage
who used
sites
in 2014 accounted for around 12%, which was 8% lower than that in 2015. There was
5% and 8% that seen in the Correct subject-verb agreement
were
porportion
of online Correct your spelling
proportion
adults
who used four sites
in both years 2014, 2015 respectively. Last
category was five Change the article
The last
sites
, around 2% online
Change preposition
of online
users
used
in 2104 and 4% Add a missing verb
were used
adults
Change preposition
of adults
used
in 2105.Add a missing verb
were used
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