The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and today Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates how a waterfront estate transformed after some development in Australia over a 74-year period from 1950 until now.
Overall
, the beachfront space has experienced considerable changes between 1950 and present
. The main development Correct article usage
the present
are
the erection and Change the verb form
is
addtion
Correct your spelling
adding
addition
some
amenities.
As can be seen from the map, in 1950, near the main road, there were some facilities including Change preposition
of some
the
playground, Correct article usage
a
dinning
tables, Correct your spelling
dining
pavillion
and Correct your spelling
pavilion
the
car park. Correct article usage
a
In
the opposite side, two Change preposition
On
25 meter
Add a hyphen
25-meter
pool
were located near a beach.
Turning to 74 years later, we can see that a lot of changes in the waterfront place in Australia. Fix the agreement mistake
pools
Firstly
, the playground zone in the year 1950 was replace
Wrong verb form
replaced
to
the second car park in the top left-hand corner. Change preposition
by
Secondly
, the pool which is in the southern west of this
location has extended in size from 25m to 50m. The road also
expand
to the east side of Change the verb form
expands
this
area and acces to
the lighthouse. Correct your spelling
accesses
In addition
, it can be seen that the addition of some new amneities
Correct your spelling
amenities
such
as two surf clubs and the large restaurant near the beach at the moment. However
, a lighthouse, the first car park and pool
Correct article usage
the pool
in
the Change preposition
on
leftside
remain unchanged.Correct your spelling
left side
left-side
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