The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graphs illustrate information about

Subscription

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the Subscription

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of mobile

phone

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phones

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and fixed phone lines in four countries namely, Enitrca,

India

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the UK

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and

Uruguary

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Uruguay

. Over ten periods from 2005 to 2015.

Overall

, it is clearly seen that there are dramatic changes in both lines. Uruguay and

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the Uk

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tend to highest level,

by contrast

; Eritca has the same level through all periods.

Turing

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to the first point, we can observe that

Eritrca

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Europe

and

India

accorder

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accorded

the same levels over first five years,

pproximately

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approximately

10.

Additionally

India

has started to go up

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until

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untill

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arrived

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just above 50 but unfortunately, Eritca accomplished in the same approximate.

Furthermore

obviously

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obviously,

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we can note that there is a sharp increase

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in the UK

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from under just 50 to

reached

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apply

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50.

In addition

, the

last

point in the first line we can see

Uruguary

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Uruguay

had no change through all

priods

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periods

which

acqiure

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acquire

nearly 100.

Lastly

, we can see that all countries still

the

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have the

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same increase in all

pirods

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periods

Uruguary

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Uruguay

India

and Eritrea had the different

precentages

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percentages

, 60,30,50 and 20

prespectively

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respectively

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