The following pie charts show the main modes of transportation people used to to travel to university for work or study in 2004 and 2009.
The charts
compares
the types of Change the verb form
compare
transports
that people Fix the agreement mistake
transport
use
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used
to
for work or study in 2004 and 2009. Change preposition
apply
Overall
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car
was the most popular option of transport in 2004 and Add an article
the car
bus
took over the popularity in 2009.
Car was used by more than half of the people in 2004. Add an article
the bus
a bus
However
, the number of car users declined to slightly above a quarter in 2009. The second most used transportation was Linking Words
bus
starting with 33% in 2004Correct article usage
the bus
,
and grew to 46% Remove the comma
apply
at the end
of the period. Linking Words
Bicycle
began with just below 10% and people grew Fix the agreement mistake
Bicycles
interest
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interested
on
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in
this
type of transportation in 2009 with 16% users. Commuting by train and walking to the university received more attention during the period. They started with small numbers in 2004, 3% and 4% respectively and these numbers rose slightly to 4% and 6% by 2009.Linking Words
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