The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate significant changes in the layout of the area over time. The maps
shows
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how the village of
stokeford
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Stokeford
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has transformed from 1930 to 2010. As can be seen, over the given period, the area underwent substantial development. A notable transformation can be observed in the eastern section of the map. Comparing the two maps,
it is clear that
there have been several alterations.
First,
the farmland has been removed and altered with many houses and several buildings
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been added. In 2010, the primary school has been expansion and the houses opposite the school
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increased.
The
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eastern of the highway there are many extensions for houses. As shown, on the east side of the map has been reduced the size of the retirement home
.
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And there are new road was built running from east to north of the town.
Overall
, the map shows a shift towards modernization and urban development.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • village
  • maps
  • Stokeford
  • 1930
  • 2010
  • main features
  • overview
  • changes
  • similarities
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