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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mainfeatures, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mainfeatures, and make comparisons where relevant
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The supplied table indicates data about the expenditure of a
consumer
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 on various parts in five different nations in 2002. It can be clearly seen that the highest amount of
consumer
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 expenditure was for food, drinks and tobacco in Turkey.
However
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, people did not tend to spend
money
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 on leisure and education as much as other items over the period. In 2002, exactly 32.14% of
money
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 was spent on food, drinks and tobacco, (which was the highest proportion of
consumer
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 expenditure over the period) just ahead of the share of spending
money
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 in Ireland at 28,91%.
Moreover
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, the amount of
consumer
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 spending on clothing and footwear in Ireland was as
less
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low
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 as Spain and Turkey at 6.43%, 6.51% and 6.63%, respectively.
In contrast
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, individuals did not prefer to spend their
money
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 on leisure and education at 1.98% in Spain in 2002. (Which was the lowest proportion of
consumer
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 payment over the whole year). Surprisingly, the amount of
consumer
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 spending on leisure and education in Italy was the same as
Sweden
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in Sweden
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accounted
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accounting
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 for 3.20% and 3.22%, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumer, money with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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