The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mainfeatures, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mainfeatures, and make comparisons where relevant
The supplied table indicates data about the expenditure of a
consumer
on various parts in five different nations in 2002. It can be clearly seen that the highest amount of
consumer
expenditure was for food, drinks and tobacco in Turkey.
However
, people did not tend to spend
money
on leisure and education as much as other items over the period. In 2002, exactly 32.14% of
money
was spent on food, drinks and tobacco, (which was the highest proportion of
consumer
expenditure over the period) just ahead of the share of spending
money
in Ireland at 28,91%.
Moreover
, the amount of
consumer
spending on clothing and footwear in Ireland was as
less
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low
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as Spain and Turkey at 6.43%, 6.51% and 6.63%, respectively.
In contrast
, individuals did not prefer to spend their
money
on leisure and education at 1.98% in Spain in 2002. (Which was the lowest proportion of
consumer
payment over the whole year). Surprisingly, the amount of
consumer
spending on leisure and education in Italy was the same as
Sweden
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in Sweden
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accounted
Wrong verb form
accounting
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for 3.20% and 3.22%, respectively.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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