In recent years, many local shop owners have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, people
tends
to Change the verb form
tend
shop
in large shopping centers
or malls Change the spelling
centres
instead
of local shops
. This
behaviour caused some local shops
closed
their Change the verb form
to close
business
. In my opinion, this
is a sign of negative development. Local shop
CEOs can not innovate creatively to compete with shopping malls and it will disrupt money
cycle Correct article usage
the money
beause
too much Correct your spelling
because
money
concentrated
in big Add a missing verb
is concentrated
companies
.
Customer
behavioral
change is not happening without a cause. Some reasons must be behind it and local Change the spelling
behavioural
shop
owners
should analyze it. If customers prefer malls over small shops
, there must be some demands which small shops
can not fulfill
. Change the spelling
fulfil
Therefore
, small business
owners
should think creatively and make innovations to fulfill
what buyers need.
When Change the spelling
fulfil
small
Add an article
a small
business
fails to adapt with
Change preposition
to
customer
behavior
changes, it will make more Change the spelling
behaviour
money
goes
to the one who can adapt, in Verb problem
apply
this
situation is the big companies
. How big companies
spend their money
will be different on
how local Change preposition
from
shop
owners
spend theirs. So, it will disrupt the money
cycle locally because less money
will go to some areas it used to be. Maybe, local business
not related to groceries will Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
get
affected too Verb problem
be
beacuse
of Correct your spelling
because
this
change.
Finally
, it is Correct article usage
the customer
customer
right to buy wherever they want to buy. Change noun form
customer's
Therefore
it is the business
owners
Change noun form
owners'
owner's
job's
to adapt Change noun form
job
with
the changes. Local Change preposition
to
shop
CEOs need to innovate creatively to fulfill
Change the spelling
fulfil
customer
demands. So, the money
will not too
Add a missing verb
be too
much
concentrated in big Correct quantifier usage
apply
companies
revenue and will Change noun form
companies'
company's
distribute
fairly enough to make local areas Wrong verb form
be distributed
economic
thrive. If things are not changing, sooner or later will cause negative development within some areas.Correct word choice
apply
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