Some
countries
have a high rate of unemployed people. As
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these
countries
are still developing, they need resources from developed
countries
but sometimes these developing
countries
cannot
the requirement which changes its one of the
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which affects jobs for their young professionals
of
this
the individuals of that
countries
believedWrong verb form
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that it is better to let their
children
go for just primary
school
notAdd the comma(s)
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secondaryAdd an article
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school
.
School
structureCorrect subject-verb agreement
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the
childChange noun form
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brain and
development
which will help in enhancing the
and professional
development
of each individual.
This
essay will discuss why I disagree with
this
statement and will present suitable examples.
Schools
are structuring each and every
individualsChange to a genitive case
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childChange noun form
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growth and
development
to deal with
physicalAdd an article
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and professional world.
For example
, recently I
had Unnecessary verb
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read in one of the
that one boy coming from
developingCorrect article usage
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country even though he didn't
cameChange the verb form
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from
wealthyAdd an article
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family but with his
school
and
parentsChange noun form
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supportsChange the verb form
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he
has Unnecessary verb
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finished his education early. So, to
supportsWrong verb form
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this
we can say that
schools
are structing the
childChange noun form
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growth and
to letChange the verb form
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their
children
educateWrong verb form
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until secondary is very
as in high
schools
we choose our best subjects to help us grow
through Change preposition
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further
in our life.
Secondly
, as
the Remove the article
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each
individualsChange to a singular noun
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areCorrect subject-verb agreement
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learning best from
its Correct pronoun usage
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high
school
they are capable
to createChange preposition
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the Correct article usage
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employment of their own as they are smart enough to make it through
life.
For example
, the top
CEO'sChange noun form
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of the
countries
are coming from developing
countries
so in general developing
countries
have a lot of talent in it.
Schools
are just helping them structure to make it through
physicalAdd an article
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and professional world.
Although
, in some
countries
itsReplace the word
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a fact that they don't have
properCorrect article usage
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resources to let their
children
go through high
school
because of
this
they opt to move out
throughChange preposition
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their
countries
to learn from
bestCorrect article usage
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schools
and universities.
For
some
countries
like Nigeria they are lacking in some resources so their
each Correct determiner usage
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children
opt to move out of
countryAdd an article
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to find a proper
ndCorrect your spelling
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employment. As
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employment is
veryAdd an article
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important source for them to feed their family.
To sum up
,
schools
are very
for
child
growth and
development
especially high
school
so,
Correct pronoun usage
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itsCorrect your spelling
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very crucial to go to high
school
to deal with
physicalAdd an article
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and professional world.
Although
, there are some factors which
isChange the verb form
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affecting them to go
forChange preposition
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high
school
but Remove the conjunction
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with the help of developed
countries
we can still overcome
this
situation.