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The graph below shows the hours of teaching per year done by each teacher in four different countries in 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the hours of teaching per year done by each teacher in four different countries in 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the number of teaching
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 per year among teachers in four different countries in 2001.
Overall
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, we can see in the graph that the
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spend
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 in teaching upper secondary dominated other categories.
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 the lower secondary had various time
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 in each country, the
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spend
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 in primary education contributed the least. In the USA, the average
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spend
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 by teachers in
upper
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the upper
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 secondary
level
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 stood the highest at approximately 1100
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,
then
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 followed closely by the lower secondary around 1050
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. As for the primary
level
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, the time
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 was nearly 900
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.
In contrast
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, in Ireland, the lower secondary surpassed both
upper
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the upper
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 secondary and primary
level
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 with
the
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a
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 total of 800
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 of teaching.
In addition
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 to the upper secondary and primary
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level
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, the number of
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were
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 nearly 700
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 and 600
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, respectively. As for the remaining countries, both Japan and Spain had the exact
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 in primary and lower secondary education with
the
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 total of 600
hours
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 in each
level
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 of study.
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hours
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 in upper secondary in Japan
was
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 just over 650
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. Compared to the
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spend
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 in Spain which was nearly a thousand, there is a huge gap in
this
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 category between both countries.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, level with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual hours of teaching
  • teaching workload
  • educational systems
  • teacher-student ratio
  • significantly
  • slightly
  • noticeably
  • gap
  • highest/lowest number of hours
  • compare
  • contrast
  • reflect
  • variations
  • distribution of teaching hours
  • average
  • respectively
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