The graph below shows the hours of teaching per year done by each teacher in four different countries in 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the number of teaching
hours
per year among teachers in four different countries in 2001.
Overall
, we can see in the graph that the hours
spend
in teaching upper secondary dominated other categories. Wrong verb form
spent
While
the lower secondary had various time spend
in each country, the Wrong verb form
spent
hours
spend
in primary education contributed the least.
In the USA, the average Wrong verb form
spent
hours
spend
by teachers in Change the form of the verb
spent
upper
secondary Correct article usage
the upper
level
stood the highest at approximately 1100 hours
, then
followed closely by the lower secondary around 1050 hours
. As for the primary level
, the time spend
was nearly 900 Change the form of the verb
spent
hours
. In contrast
, in Ireland, the lower secondary surpassed both upper
secondary and primary Correct article usage
the upper
level
with the
total of 800 Correct article usage
a
hours
of teaching. In addition
to the upper secondary and primary level
, the number of Fix the agreement mistake
levels
hours
spend
Wrong verb form
spent
were
nearly 700 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
hours
and 600 hours
, respectively.
As for the remaining countries, both Japan and Spain had the exact hours
in primary and lower secondary education with the
total of 600 Correct article usage
a
hours
in each level
of study. For the
Change preposition
The
hours
spend
in upper secondary in Japan Wrong verb form
spent
was
just over 650 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
hours
. Compared to the hours
spend
in Spain which was nearly a thousand, there is a huge gap in Wrong verb form
spent
this
category between both countries.Submitted by ethia.oktaviani on
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