The maps below shows the village of Stakeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information
The maps
provides
information on the development of Stakeford in 1930 and 2010. A significant extension of the village has been clearly presented.
In 1930 Stakeford consisted of one main road along which buildings were located. In the north before the bridge that passes the River Stoke 10 houses were constructed Change the verb form
provide
as well as
two shops and post
office on the west side of the road and Correct article usage
a post
primary
school on the east. Behind the schools and between Correct article usage
a primary
river
and the road there was a farmland area. In the south part of the village Add an article
the river
Large
house with Correct article usage
a Large
garden
was located.
Add an article
a garden
In contrast
, by 2010 Stakeford had come a huge expansion to the east, wets, and primarily south. Few additional roads to the new estates were added in the former farmland areas and the number of houses increased to 51. Post office and primary school remained in their original positions; however
, a development of the school is also
presented. The large house with the garden was transformed into the
retirement home.Correct article usage
a
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