The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph provides information about the amount of US households with 5 types of electronic devices
in
Change preposition
apply
the
between 1995 Correct article usage
apply
to
1999. Correct word choice
and
Overall
, all technologies that were used over the period
had an upward trend, meanwhile DVD
player fluctuated during the Correct article usage
the DVD
period
.
Phone
received a dramatic rise in terms of use over the years. It began with just below 20% and rose dramatically reaching three Fix the agreement mistake
Phones
quarter
by 1999. Fix the agreement mistake
quarters
Similarly
, the users
of Correct quantifier usage
number of users
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the internet
internet
in Capitalize word
Internet
household
grew significantly from 10% Fix the agreement mistake
households
in
the beginning of the Change the preposition
at
period
and increased by
fivefold in 1999. The number of households that used Change preposition
apply
computer
increased steadily during the Fix the agreement mistake
computers
period
from 40% in 1995 to 70% in 1999. Washing machine, which was the kind of technology that were
used the most, starting from 60% and ending with 80% by 1999.
Change the verb form
was
In contrast
, DVD player was the only device which fluctuated. This
category started with a quarter, then
dropped to around 15% in 1996, however
the number went up until the end of the Add a comma
however,
period
with 40% households.Submitted by ameliahanakaru01 on
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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