The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph provides information about the amount of US households with 5 types of electronic devices
in
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the
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between 1995
to
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and
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1999.
Overall
, all technologies that were used over the
period
had an upward trend, meanwhile
DVD
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the DVD
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player fluctuated during the
period
.
Phone
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Phones
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received a dramatic rise in terms of use over the years. It began with just below 20% and rose dramatically reaching three
quarter
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quarters
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by 1999.
Similarly
, the
users
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number of users
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of
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the internet
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internet
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in
household
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households
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grew significantly from 10%
in
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at
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the beginning of the
period
and increased
by
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apply
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fivefold in 1999. The number of households that used
computer
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computers
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increased steadily during the
period
from 40% in 1995 to 70% in 1999. Washing machine, which was the kind of technology that
were
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was
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used the most, starting from 60% and ending with 80% by 1999.
In contrast
, DVD player was the only device which fluctuated.
This
category started with a quarter,
then
dropped to around 15% in 1996,
however
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the number went up until the end of the
period
with 40% households.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Households
  • Technology adoption
  • Growth rate
  • Decline rate
  • Milestones
  • Obsolete
  • Societal factors
  • Economic conditions
  • Advancements
  • Consumer preferences
  • Market saturation
  • Trend analysis
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