The below chart gives information the data of immigration, emigration and net migration in UK between 1999 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The below chart gives information the data of immigration, emigration and net migration in UK between 1999 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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immigration, emigration, and net migration in the UK between 1999 and 2008. The data clearly show an upward trend in the number of each of
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. Between 1999 and 2003 a similar pattern in both immigration and emigration had been presented as they witnessed a moderate increase from 450,000 to 510,000, and from 300,000 to 480,000, respectively. From
this
time,
however
, immigration began to rise dramatically, and despite a slight fall to 580 thousand in 2005, it reached its peak at 600,000 in 2006. Since
then
it has been on a relatively stable level. Emigration,
on the other hand
, suffered a rapid
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in 2007 to 350,000, to later climb to 430,00 in 2008.
In contrast
, net migration remained constant between 1999 and 2003 at 160,000.
Then
, a rapid increase was observed to 250,000 in 2004. Despite a moderate decline to 200,000 in 2005 and 2006, it grew to 240,000 in 2007. In the
last
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there was a decrease to 180,000.
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