The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffe and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar chart compares the information of
coffee
and tea consumption habits of residents in a 4 weeks
period in five Australian Correct your spelling
4-week
cities
.
Overall
, the contribution of people
that
chose to go to a cafe for Correct pronoun usage
who
coffee
or tea stood at the highest among the other catagories
in the majority of the Correct your spelling
categories
cities
. Whereas
, freshly bought coffee
by the people
has the lowest percentage in all cities
.
Regarding the interest of the persons who consumed fresh coffee
, in Sydney
, the figure
held at around 43%, whereas
in Melbourne being
just slightly below Verb problem
it was
Sydney
's. Followed by Hobart with the
total number of approximately 37%. As for Brisbane and Adelaide, both Correct article usage
a
cities
stood at nearly the same percentage at about 38%.
The number of people
who went to a cafe in Melbourne is nearly two-thirds of the rate. while
, in Sydney
and Hobart around 61% and 62%, respectively. In Brisbane
the Add a comma
Brisbane,
figure
stayed at just over 55%, and approximately 49% in the city of Adelaide.
The percentage of people
who bought soluble coffee
rank
the highest in Hobart at approximately 54%. Correct subject-verb agreement
ranks
While
the figure
in Brisbane stood at around 42%, its figure
reached exactly half of the porpotion
in Adelaide. As for Melbourne the rate Correct your spelling
portion
proportion
just
under half, followed Add a missing verb
is just
with
Change preposition
by
Sydney
at nearly 47%.Submitted by ethia.oktaviani on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, cities, people, sydney, figure with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
▼