The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented bar chart compares data about how communities who lived and will live in the urban areas of 4 various regions were increased and will be raised.
Overall
, it was important that the number of people who lived in cities in all districts jumped;
additionally
, the governments predict that
this
trend will grow.
According to
the graph, the population who did not live in rural areas was the global evidence owing to the fact that we can see in 1950, it was 30% for the whole world;
then
it climbed moderately and it reached 48% in 50 years later
also
, it will become two times over in 2030. Latin America, the main district that had and will have a massive figure of inhabitants who lived in the cities, was nearly 40% in 1950;
thereafter
, it touched 70% in 2000 after that it will hit roughly four-fifths in 2030. The diagram demonstrates that not only Asia but
Also
Africa had approximately the same percentage
as
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nearly 10%. Later both of them leapt significantly and became 39%. later, Asia will improve somewhat to 56%;
however
, the others won't go up
such
as another one and it will be just over a half.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban population
  • future predictions
  • historical data
  • urbanization trends
  • rates of growth
  • developed countries
  • developing countries
  • economic development
  • migration
  • government policies
  • upward trend
  • pace of urbanization
  • catching up
  • comparative analysis
  • regional differences
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