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The Table Below Gives Information on Consumer Spending on Different Items in Five Different Countries in 2002. Summarise the Information by Selecting and Reporting the Main Features, and Make Comparisons Where Relevant.

The Table Below Gives Information on Consumer Spending on Different Items in Five Different Countries in 2002. Summarise the Information by Selecting and Reporting the Main Features, and Make Comparisons Where Relevant.
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The chart depicts the results of individual expenditure on various items like Food, Drink, Tobacco, Clothing, Footwear, Leisure and Education from several nations like
Ireland
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,Italy,
Spain
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,
Sweden
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 and
Turkey
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 in 2002.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 Food, Drink and Tabbaco have the highest investment with the leading market, afterwards the Clothing and Footwear
industry
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, and
lastly
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 the lowest expenses on Leisure and Education.
To begin
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 with, in 2002
Ireland
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 had the second highest consumption of Food, Drink and Tobacco
industry
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 with above a quarter 28.91%.
Likewise
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,
Turkey
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 with first the highest with 32.14%, afterwards
Spain
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, Italy, and
Sweden
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 with 18.80%, 16.36% and 15.77%.
In addition
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,
Ireland
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's spending on the Clothing and Footwear
industry
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 was 6.43% alike
Spain
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Sweden
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 and
Turkey
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 with 6.51%, 5.40% and 6.63% and Italy with the highest expenditure of 9%. In the leisure and Education
industry
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,
Turkey
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 has the highest spending of nearly 4.35% similar to
Sweden
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, Italy,
Ireland
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 and
Spain
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 with 3.22%, 3.20%, 2.21% and 1.98%respectively.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ireland, spain, sweden, turkey, industry with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • food
  • drinks
  • tobacco
  • clothing
  • footwear
  • household goods
  • services
  • leisure
  • education
  • other products
  • comparison
  • highest
  • lowest
  • followed by
  • in all countries
  • various
  • summarise
  • main features
  • relevant
  • information
  • selecting
  • reporting
  • spending
  • table
  • goods
  • data
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