The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in European country between 1979 and 2004.
The graph
sows
the Correct your spelling
shows
consuption
of fish and some different kinds of meat. In a European country between 1979 and Correct your spelling
consumption
2004
people change their Add a comma
2004,
consuption
. The most popular food was Correct your spelling
consumption
beef
in 1979. It was 210 grams per person per week. But after 1987 1989 this
food's grams per person decreased for
200. Change preposition
to
Chicken
was Add an article
The chicken
second
Correct article usage
the second
popular
consumption after Correct quantifier usage
most popular
beef
. When beef
was drop
, chicken became first for 1988-2004 years. Third the consumption of food was lamb. IT Wrong verb form
dropped
was go
down Change the verb form
went
150
to 60 grams per Change preposition
by 150
perso
per week.And Correct your spelling
person
in
1989 to 2004 it was still third. People chose fish less than others and Change preposition
from
25
years it was no change. As can be seen from the graph the amount of increased consumption was chicken, Change preposition
for 25
beef
downfall more than others. The
period between 1979 and 2004 fish was less Change preposition
In the
choosed
meal and in 2004 it Correct your spelling
chosen
not
Add a missing verb
has not
be
changed yet.Unnecessary verb
apply
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