The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. m Average distance in miles traveled per person per year, by mode of travel

The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.

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Average distance in miles traveled per person per year, by mode of travel
The table depicts how
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of different means of travel has
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during an interval of 15 years between 1985 and 2000. In a general look at the table, it can be perceived that cars were the most popular mode of travel
while
taxis were the least popular ones.
However
, the most dramatic increase was for
taxi
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tripled in number after 15 years. Speaking of the year 1985,
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was the most used facility with a figure of 3199. After that,
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bus was the second most used transportation mode.
Moreover
, walking, bicycle, train and
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bus are other modes of travel that lie in the chart in
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figures. Coming to 2000,
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was still the highest with 4806.
While
most of these modes increased in number, walking and bicycle had been losing popularity between 1985 and 2000. In
this
year
bicycle
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bicycles
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became the lowest by 41 even lower than
taxi
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taxis
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which had a number of 42.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average distance
  • miles traveled
  • mode of travel
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant change
  • most popular
  • least popular
  • external influences
  • economic factors
  • technological advancements
  • policy changes
  • environmental impact
  • societal impact
  • general trend
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