Some people think that the media (newspapers) have the right to publish details of people,s private life while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views.
Most
of
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people
believe that printing media is suitable for publishing the personal life
of an individual while
others think that it is actionable to print someone
's private life
.In this
essay, I will discuss both points of view.
On the one hand, most of
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people
assume that printing individual life
in the newspaper is a beneficial activity because newspapers shape our attitudes, opinions, beliefs
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and beliefs
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people
around the world that's why printing the life
of famous people
alters our attitude toward the special circumstances beside that, reading about the life
of people
makes it easier to deal with the wilder situations.Moreover
, people
come to know the hardship of someone
's life
.For example
, using the data from the national survey of US newspapers, the study examines the attitude toward news
coverage of personal life
, almost 80% of people
agree with this
.
On the other hand
, many people
think that it is delinquent to cast a
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about the private lives of individuals because of emotional, cognitive, and behavioural consequences that may result from the disinformation about someone
's life
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, misinformation leads to suicidal effects.casting fake news
about someone
's private life
causes depression in their families that's why the government should take responsibility for controlling the fake news
about someone
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To sum up
, to cast a
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news
of private life
in the newspaper has some pros and cons sometimes it is beneficial for economic development but it has some crucial effects.In my opinion, it should be banned.Submitted by madihaali8470 on
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coherence cohesion
Clearly separate and elaborate on each point of view in different paragraphs, ensuring each has its own supporting evidence and examples.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph
flows logically to the next with appropriate linking words and clear structure.
task achievement
Provide more detailed and specific examples to support each point, ensuring they directly relate to the main argument presented.
task achievement
Clarify and expand on some ideas, making sure they are fully comprehensive and relevant to the essay topic.
task achievement
The essay covers both viewpoints clearly, giving a balanced perspective on the issue.
coherence cohesion
The conclusion effectively summarizes the main points and provides a clear personal opinion.
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