The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The two charts provide data on the percentage of families in an unnamed country that possessed labour-saving devices
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the average time spent weekly on domestic chores over a one-hundred-year period. The data reveals a clear relationship between the growth in ownership of
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devices and the decreasing amount of time devoted to household tasks. The percentage of homes possessing refrigerators grew dramatically after they were first introduced in 1920, climbing to 50% ownership in just twenty years and to 90% by 1960.By the year 1980, the peak of 100% was reached, a figure that has been maintained throughout the remainder of the period surveyed. Vacuum cleaners were
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found in every home but from the year 2000 onwards, after having risen steadily from 30% in 1920 to 90% in 1980.
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, by 2020 only
three quarters
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of all homes possessed a washing machine.Ownership of
this
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appliance rose gradually from 40% in 1920 to 70% in 1960 and, despite suffering a slight fall over the following twenty years,
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maintained a steady growth since.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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