The maps below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
Student numbers are predicted to rise by over 60%, from 600 in 2004 to 1,000 by the year 2024.
To accommodate
this
increase, the path that joins the main entrance to the sports field will be shortened, allowing the two existing school buildings to be linked. Additionally
, on the site where the sports field currently stands, a third school building is to be constructed together with
a second car park to the right of this
new teaching area. Connecting this
car park to the main entrance will be a new road which will pass along the south side of the existing school buildings.Submitted by almansouradel1 on
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