The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
In the diagram presented, The process of recycling
plastic
goods to form everyday objects, Like pens, shirts, new bottles and everyday objects is shown.
First,
plastic
bottles, pens or cups are placed in specified recycling bins from which they are collected and then
sent to recycling centres for sorting. Once the goods suitable for recycling have been selected, they are compressed and converted into large blocks that are subsequently
sent through crushing machines. The crushing process is necessary to produce pieces that are sufficiently small to be later turned into plastic
pellets. Before that, however
, the crushed plastic
is thoroughly washed.
After that stage, the pallets are heated to form into raw materials, taking away any minor or major impurities away
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the stage after, the raw material is grouped upChange preposition
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split
this
can allow the materials to be sent out to different manufacturers, where the raw materials can be produced into end products which are most likely going to be recycled again. Thus
restarting the whole process.Submitted by almansouradel1 on
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