The chart shows information about various professions in the UK and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession.
Two diagrams illustrate every
job
's income and working hours
in the UK.
Overview, concerning salaries, people who take up any job
acquire better earnings after they work three years.
According to
research, in all occupations, the "Underground driver" obtains the best remuneration with about 50000 pounds in the beginning and over 50000 pounds after three years, and still, its working hours
are shorter than any other job
. However
, nurses receive the lowest amount among other occupations. The "Nurse" gets paid little merely from 10000 to 20000 pounds and the hours
nurses have to work is 38.
Apart from that, regarding average working hours
per week, the teacher, and the firefighter work the same, longest hours
of all professions. The figure is 55. Whereas
, people who engage in firefighting have higher compensation packages than teaching.
The difference in money is approximately 10000.
Moreover
, the "Police" take slightly over 20000 at the start of this
job
and similarly
, the almost same pay after three years. Plus, the working hours
of doing this
profession is 40.Submitted by hayashidajinja820 on
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