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The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the urbanisation of
people
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 from rural to urban
areas
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 and its number of predictions for the future years in Indonesia,
Iran
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, and
Russia
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 from 2000 to 2025.
First,
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in 2000,
Iran
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 had fewer communities moving from rural to urban
areas
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 which was below 10
million
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people
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, and
Russia
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 had more migrants about 15
million
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people
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. Meanwhile, by 2025,
Iran
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 will have significantly increased, with almost 100
million
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people
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 moving from suburbs to downtown
areas
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.
Similarly
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,
Russia
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 is predicted to have a significant increase to 90
million
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 communities moving from rural to urban
areas
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.
On the other hand
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, by 2000, Indonesia had 10
million
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people
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 who migrated from rural to urban
areas
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. They had slightly increased migration in their community, making them the country whose
people
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 moving from rural to urban
areas
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 is the lowest in 2025. In conclusion,
Iran
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 and
Russia
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 are more likely to migrate to urban
areas
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 which generally increase from 2000 to 2025 rather than Indonesia, which shows less increase in the
people
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 moving from rural to urban
areas
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, areas, iran, russia, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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