The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The visual diagram illustrates the number of tourists who visited a particular Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. There was a racket in the total group at 2.5 from 2016 to 2017.
The total experienced
a
growth Remove the article
apply
by
1 Change preposition
of
million
visitors
from 2010 to 2015 by more than 2.5 million
, however
; this
amount remained steady between 2015 to 2016 after that time this
amount jumped to 3.5 in 2017.
The number of visitors
staying on the island experienced fluctuation from 2010 to 2013 by 0.5 million
, but this
number rose to 2 million
in 2017 while
visitors
who were staying on cruise ships stood at 0.5 million
from 2010 to 2011 also
this
amount decreased to less than 0.5 million
in 2012 after
this
year this
group of visitors
climbed dramatically to 2013 to 2017 by 2 million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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