The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population In four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The graph shows the trend
about
the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, adding predictions in 2030 and 2040.
The percentage of Indonesia was in Change preposition
of
last
place with around 14% in 1970. The second place was Thailand with about 18%. Philippines
and Malaysia were almost the same Correct article usage
The Philippines
number
with around 30%. These were in joint first in 1970. By the end of 2020, the rate of population in cites
Correct your spelling
cities
have
grown up, Malaysia had a sharp rising, Wrong verb form
had
it
Correct word choice
and it
grows
up to over 80%, placing Wrong verb form
has grown
in
the Correct pronoun usage
it in
number
one position in 2020. In addition
, the rate of Philippines
Correct article usage
the Philippines
have
slightly increased to Change the verb form
has
the
twice that in 1970, placing Correct article usage
apply
in
third in 2020. In second place in 2020 is Indonesia, Correct your spelling
it
the
rate Rephrase
where the
have
increased sharply Correct subject-verb agreement
has
with
over 60%. It is Change preposition
to
forth
of that in 1970. The Correct your spelling
fourth
number
of Thailand have
gradually increased to about 45%, placing Change the verb form
has
in
the bottom spot.
The prediction in 2040 Correct pronoun usage
it in
also
shown, the rating in 2040 is Add a missing verb
is also
same
as Correct article usage
the same
2020
. The Change preposition
in 2020
number
of living in city
will be growing up.Add an article
the city
a city
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