The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The following chart illustrates the money earned from exporting different types of
products
in a country during 2015 and 2016. The table displays the proportion of how the export
in each category changed from 2015 to 2016. At first glance, it is evident that petroleum Fix the agreement mistake
exports
products
had the lion's share of the entire earnings from export
over these two years. Fix the agreement mistake
exports
In contrast
, although
textiles had a small share in
the money earned from Change preposition
of
export
in 2015, the percentage change in Fix the agreement mistake
exports
value
of
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apply
it
was the highest from 2015 to 2016, compared to the other Correct pronoun usage
apply
export
products
.
Looking at the details, over 60 billion
dollars
were earned by exporting Petroleum products
in both 2015 and 2016. Interestingly, the value
of the earning
in Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
this
category rose by 3% from 2015 to 2016. In terms of Engineered goods, the rate of export
earning
increased moderately by 8.5%, from less than 60 Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
billion
dollars
in 2015 to more than 60 billion
dollars
in 2016.
Taking a closer look at Gems-and-jewellery
chart, the country earned over 40 Correct article usage
the Gems-and-jewellery
billion
dollars
by exporting gems and jewellery in both 2015 and 2016. However
, the exporting
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export
value
dropped by 5.18%. In the agricultural products
category, it can be seen that the value
of earning
had a slight increase Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
by
0.81%. Change preposition
of
Lastly
, money earned from exporting textile
were more than 20 Fix the agreement mistake
textiles
billion
dollars
and half
in 2015. Correct article usage
a half
But
it reached over 30 Correct word choice
However
billion
dollars
in 2016, having a significant rise by
15.24%.Change preposition
of
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Vocabulary: Replace the words products, export, value, billion, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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