The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminum cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminum cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminum cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
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The presented graph demonstrates how
aluminium
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cans
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are produced from waste.
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, it is important that manufacturing
aluminium
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cans
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from recycling has 7 steps which start with garbage and end with companies using these kinds of
cans
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for their products.
According to
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the circulation, at the start, people throw out the
cans
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of their drink into the trash;
then
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the garbage is sent by truck to the place that has a range of waste materials;
thereafter
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,
aluminium
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cans
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are selected and transferred to the factory which does the recycling process. The diagram illustrates that in the third
stage
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water canes have to become clean and small spaces;
as a result
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, in the factory the devices washing them by some detergent and
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water after
that, sorted by size for shredding better. Later compare them to one thing. In the fourth
section
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we have tools that generate
aluminium
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surface from compressed things by heating to have liquid and melting to produce solid. The fact is important that
cans
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are cylinders, so we should roll the surface 2.5 to 6 mm to have
cans
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;
hence
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, we have
cans
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that are from recycling;
additionally
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, the crucial fact is that 74% of
cans
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that the UK inhabitants use are from recycling.

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