The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminum cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminum cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The flow chart illustrates the process of aluminium
cans
cycling which is made by humans
in
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world
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.
Overall
,
it is clear that
there are seven distinct stages illustrated in the process, commencing with used
cans
in the environment and ending with the development of reusing
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it
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. The first stage is when used
cans
are collected from the garbage by a big track. The next step
after
this
is starting of cleaning all of these
cans
, and
then
sorting them in favourable
place
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for a week,
and
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before compressing
it
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they shred all of these
cans
first. Over time, are heated and melted manually. In the subsequent stage, rolling by 2.5mm to 6mm thick is started, the final stage of
this
cycle is when recycling is begun, and
then
, the reusing of 74% recycled in the United States is finished. Having completed all these steps, the cycling process will
then
begin again
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