The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. Summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the recent situation of the Norbiton industrial area and the future development plan for the site.
Recently, the area used for industrial purposes which consists of many factory buildings and transportation facilities. Meanwhile, in the future, it will transform into a residential complex.
Overall
, the factories are situated on the south of the river. it facilitated rounded roads to support industrial activities. Furthermore
, There is farmland also
in the north of the factories which separated
from the river.
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is separated
However
, The future plan has functionally changed. It will use to be a residential ecosystem. There will be many support facilities such
as the Medical Centre, Shops, School, and the Playground. Moreover
, this
housing will expand across the river, On the north of the site. The consequence is the farmland area will replaced.
In conclusion, there will be a massive change in the Norbiton industry. it will transform into a residential with appropriate supporting facilities.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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