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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should pearn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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The demand for educating a non-native language is ever-increasing in the modernized world. A few people argue that the only purpose of learning an external language is for working or travelling,
while
 others believe that there are many more reasons
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this
 trend. Both these views will be explained and given a conclusion. On the one hand, it creates greater job opportunities for employees. They are able to communicate with other staff and managers, enabling a more friendly work-life environment because they can enjoy and understand others' ideas leading to lower stress and frustration.
Moreover
, they have the chance to make international connections with foreign industries that will lead to higher salaries and bonuses
while
 accessing the global market and
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 investments for the future.
Additionally
, drivers
while
 travelling must be aware of road symbols and traffic regulations to reduce commuting time and possible accidents.
For example
, a traveller driving a car in China without knowing
Chinese
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 will drive in
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directions
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, wasting time and
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 accidents.
On the other hand
, foreign languages support education.
For instance
, children knowing other languages can understand and analyse subject-related topics deeply.
As a result
, it will foster their creativity, because of the variety of knowledge and experience gained through external sources.
Nevertheless
, candidates can learn about
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, culture, and traditions of other countries and they will have a rich diversity
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 nations. Today, people are considering more about social class, racism, and disrespect for others' perspectives and the problem is
due to
 a lack of socialization with non-natives.
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, language plays an important role
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 these issues. In conclusion, personally, I believe that learning other languages for reasons like employing years and exploring are equally important to learning cultural values and researching, which enhances brain functioning and knowledge.
Submitted by Witharana Senesh Rasinda Wickramasinghe on

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Ensure your introduction clearly outlines both views you're discussing right from the beginning. This helps to frame your essay more effectively.
coherence cohesion
Though the essay is generally coherent, transitions between paragraphs could be smoother. Connect ideas with appropriate linking words to enhance cohesion.
coherence cohesion
While your main ideas are clear, ensure that each paragraph introduces a single point and elaborates on it fully before moving on to the next idea.
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Try to provide more specific examples or evidence to support your points, which can make your arguments more convincing and well-rounded.
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The essay provides a balanced discussion of both viewpoints, which strengthens the argument.
coherence cohesion
There is a clear conclusion that summarizes the main points and provides your opinion on the matter, which adds clarity to your stance.
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Main points are relevant to the topic and show a good understanding of the reasons for learning a foreign language.

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