The line graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean iakand betveen 2010 and 2017.
The given graph compares the amount of overseas in
million
to the island namely the Caribbean in a seven-year interval from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
,it is clear that
the number of visitors who stayed on cruise ships fluctuated over the period while
stayers on the island continued to climb.
By contrast
,there were no stayers on cruise ships in 2010 while
it increased slowly to 0.5 million
in 2011.However
,the point rose slightly to 1 million
and 1.3 million
in 2014 and 2015,respectively.In 2017 there was a large amount of tourists on cruises at around 2 million
.Turning to the figure for stayers on the island it began at approximately 0.8 million
in 2010 which stayed unchanged in 2011.Furthermore
,there was a considerable growth from 1.3 million
in 2012 to 1.5 in 2015.In 2016, the number sharply decreased to 1.2 million
, before rising to 1.5 million
in 2017. According to
the total number of overseas visitors, it started at 1 million
and increased by 0.5 million
every year, reaching 2.5 million
in 2014. It then
peaked at 3.5 million
overseas visitors in 2017.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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