You recently bought a second-hand car from a company that sells used cars, but the car developed some problems. You have phoned, left messages and sent emails, but you have not heard anything from the company that sold you the car. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter explain the problems you have had in contacting the company, and explain your dissatisfaction describe the problems with the car tell the manager what you want him to do

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Sim. I am writing
this
letter to discuss
the
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disappointment
from
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the service and the
car
which I bought
last
month from your company. In August, I purchased
second-hand
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Nissan
centra
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SV 2023
car
from your Mississauga Jivan office. Before buying a
car
, I searched
alot
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a lot
and
then
my friend gave me your number.
Beacuse
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Because
it is so hard to trust
on
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anyone,
its
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it has
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been only one month
I
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since I
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bought the
car
.
Last
week, I went to Toronto to see my parents and
then
suddenly
car
stopped and tried many to start. After trying , several times it
starts
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and I was so stressed about it because again it
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last
sunday
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. After that
incident
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I called the office but no one answered my call
and
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I had emailed
also
so many times,
still
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no reply. I understand how busy you are, but helping customers is
also
very important. So,
its
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my humble request to give
call
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back or respond
my
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emails and I will discuss the problem. Hope to hear back soon Yours sincerely Sim
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structure
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea. This makes it easier for the reader to follow your points. For example, you could separate the description of the purchase and service issue from the description of the car's problem and your request for action.
clarity
Ensure that your explanations are clear and concise. You could be more explicit about what specific actions you expect the manager to take, such as a repair, a replacement or a refund.
tone
The letter is polite and maintains a formal tone, which is suitable for this context.
task response
You have clearly explained both the problems with the car and your difficulties in contacting the company, addressing the task requirements well.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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