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The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the
number
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 of requests for information by three different methods( in
person
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, by letter/email and by telephone) at a tourist office in the
Uk
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UK
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bewteen Jannuary
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between January
 and Fun.
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,
it is clear that
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 requests by telephone and in
person
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 are upward trend,
while
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 request by letter/ email is downward trend. Noticeably,
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number
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a number
the number
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 of
people
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are requested for
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requesting
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 information in
person
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 reaches
of
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apply
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the highest
at the end
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 of
period
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the period
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 given. In terms of
request
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requests
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 in
person
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, in January, about 400 applicants
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were
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are request
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are requested
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 which is the lowest , and
then
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 the
number
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 of applicants
increases
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increased
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 dramatically and
peacks
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peaked
 at
neearly
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nearly
 2000
people
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, which is the highest.
Similarly
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, the
number
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 of cases
are
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apply
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requested by telephone is the highest in January, which is around 900 cases,
then
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 fluctuates before climbing to approximately 1600 applicants in Jun .
On the other hand
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, the
number
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 of
people
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are
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apply
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requested by letter/email takes second place in January. the trend decreases significantly before hitting the low of
nearlyn
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nearly
 400
people
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, person, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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