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The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates
that
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the
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request
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requests
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of
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apply
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in formations at a visitor office in the UK in the first six
month
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months
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 of the year. In the
Uk
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UK
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 folks mostly use three ways to know about the information in a tourist office. The chart shows to get information
by
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apply
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physicaly
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physically
 inside the office and by phone calls
increased
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apply
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.
Majority
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The majority
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 of folks loved to get the details
by
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apply
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in person and with phone calls but
in
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at
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 the
starting
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start
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 of the years all the ways were
populars
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popular
.
However
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, people tend towards
in person
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in-person
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 with a
rapidly
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rapid
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 growth and reached
most
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the most
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 popular way to get information in June with more than 1800 individuals.
On the other hand
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, humans
also
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prefer
prefered
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prefer
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to
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by
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to
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make
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making
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 a simple call
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in
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on
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in
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 reception ,
this
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 trend
also
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 increased from 400 to 1600 in just six months but the
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in-person
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in person
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in-person
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 way
is
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has been
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 more popular
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since
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from
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since
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 April. In January near about 700 people used letters and email to know about
palces
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places
 to visit ,
unfortunatelly
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unfortunately
this
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 trend declined below 600 in April and
droped
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dropped
 to 380 in June. Folks do not
found
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find
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 that way easy.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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