The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The line chart illustrates
that
Correct determiner usage
the
request
Fix the agreement mistake
requests
of
in formations at a visitor office in the UK in the first six Change preposition
apply
month
of the year.
In the Change to a plural noun
months
Uk
folks mostly use three ways to know about the information in a tourist office. The chart shows to get information Correct your spelling
UK
by
Change preposition
apply
physicaly
inside the office and by phone callsCorrect your spelling
physically
increased
.
Verb problem
apply
Majority
of folks loved to get the details Correct article usage
The majority
by
in person and with phone calls but Change preposition
apply
in
the Change preposition
at
starting
of the years all the ways were Replace the word
start
populars
. Correct your spelling
popular
However
, people tend towards in person
with a Add a hyphen
in-person
rapidly
growth and reached Change the adverb
rapid
most
popular way to get information in June with more than 1800 individuals.Correct article usage
the most
On the other hand
, humans also
Correct your spelling
prefer
prefered
Correct your spelling
prefer
Change preposition
to
by
Change preposition
to
make
a simple call Change the verb form
making
Change preposition
in
on
reception , Change preposition
in
this
trend also
increased from 400 to 1600 in just six months but the Add a hyphen
in-person
in person
way Add a hyphen
in-person
is
more popular Wrong verb form
has been
Change preposition
since
from
April.
In January near about 700 people used letters and email to know about Change preposition
since
palces
to visit ,Correct your spelling
places
unfortunatelly
Correct your spelling
unfortunately
this
trend declined below 600 in April and droped
to 380 in June. Folks do not Correct your spelling
dropped
found
that way easy.Wrong verb form
find
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