The line chart below shows the number of cars produced in three countries from 2003 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the details of vehicles produced in Argentina,
Australia
and Thailand
in six years starting from 2003.
In both Australia
and Thailand
the numbers increased rapidly but Add a comma
Thailand,
Australia
reached the top with very little difference from Thailand
,however
demanding for cars only decreased in Argentina.
All three countries' numbers started near 300 in 2003 after
that it is increased gradually. Argentina was the only one who declined in Correct word choice
and after
number
and reached on
200 from 400. Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
,the other two countries' number
of vehicles used increased Thailand
reached 600 highest number
in 2005 and Australia
was second with only 400.
Surprising
rapid increase in cars in Add an article
The surprising
A surprising
Australia
broke all the records and hit the highest of 1119 at the end
of 2009.Consumption also
increased in Thailand
but gradually they all reached the top of the table with the second number
in 2009.
Australian and Thailand
'sconsumption of cars hit a peak in these yearsSubmitted by jagdeeptoor751 on
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, thailand, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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