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The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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provide
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 information about the three methods( in
person
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, by lettle/e-mail, by telephone) of contacting a tourist office between
January
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 and
June
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 in
UK
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the UK
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.
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, the methods of
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person
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 and by telephone
get
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are
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the
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increasing
trend
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,
while
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 the people who
request
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 by letter or e-mail experience a drop. In
January
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, the
request
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 in
person
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 is the less popular among other methods, about 400 times. The
trend
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 rose gradually to 800 in March and had
significant
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 increase to around 1900 in
June
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. The
people
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number of people
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request
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 for information by
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person
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the person
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 was 900 in
January
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, and decreased slightly to 800 in
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February
. The
trend
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 levelled off between March and April and reached a peak of 1600 in
June
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. It can be seen that the
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request
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requests
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 by letter and e-mail had a decreasing
trend
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. In
January
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, it stood at around 800 and declined mildly to about 700. The data kept going
dnow
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down
 to just below 400 in May
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 and stayed
unchange
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unchanged
 during
June
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words person, january, june, trend, request with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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