The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The two plans illustrate the development that has taken place on roadway access around a municipal hospital from 2007 until 2010 with
label
and pictures.
At first glance, Fix the agreement mistake
labels
it is clear that
there had been several construction of public facilities around the hospital, including bus station
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stations
car
parks which are located along the roads.
The hospital road
which connected the city road
and ring road
, had been added with two roundabouts. Moreover
, on the west side of the hospital road
, the trees along the road
had been cut down to make place for a bus station which connected to the two roundabouts.
In addition
, the former employee and public car
park had been turned into staff only car
park by cutting down the trees located on the east side of the hospital road
. Nonetheless
, a public car
park had been built on the west side of the hospital.Submitted by aribawadzaki on
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