The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph shows the number and the category of fast food preferred by Australian youngsters from 1975 to 2000.
Overall
, hamburgers' rates started off very poorly but it
kept skyrocketing during the given period of time. Pizza's rates Correct pronoun usage
they
also
experienced the same great increase, in spite of no changes in the last
few years. Meanwhile, fish and chips' ratings went down drastically, becoming the least preferred aspect out of all three.
Firstly
, in 1975, hamburgers were not too trendy among the
Aussie teenagers with Correct article usage
apply
the
consumption numbers of approximately 10 Correct article usage
apply
times
a year
. However
, after just a decade, this
fast food type's amount of ingestions
increased dramatically up to more than 80 Fix the agreement mistake
ingestion
times
per year
on average. Then
, it kept slowly going up to more than 100 times
annually in 2000. Pizza ratings started off with the lowest number of less
than 10 Change the quantifier
fewer
times
per annual cycle. Commencing at the bottom, it grew exponentially over 2 decades until 1995, where
it reached its peak of more than 80 Correct word choice
when
times
a year
and stayed at that amount for 5 years.
Secondly
, fish and chips was
the most preferable fast food type with Change the verb form
were
the
consumption Correct article usage
a
levels
of 100 Fix the agreement mistake
level
times
a year
. Though,
it got a minor decrease and another unsignificant increase after 10 years, it continued going down tremendously, eventually ending its way with the number of 40 Remove the comma
apply
times
per year
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