The charts below provide information on popular modes of transport in the city of Cambridge for the years 2008 and 2018

The charts below provide information on popular modes of transport in the city of Cambridge for the years 2008 and 2018
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The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of four types of transportation (cars, busses, bicycles and walking) in Cambridge for two years (2008 and 2018). The
overall
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trend shown in the data in both years is a decline in the percentage of car and bus users,
coupled with
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a rise in the rate of bicycle riders and those who preferred to walk. Regarding cars, the inhabitants of Cambridge city who used cars comprised 42% in 2008 and by 2018, it declined by about 22% to 20%.
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, the number of bus users went down by approximately 5% from 30% in the first year to 25% in the final year. In terms of bicycle riders, accounted for 17% in 2008 and by 2018, it increased by about 13% to 30%.
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, the number of inhabitants who relied on walking went up by apparently 14% from 11% to 25%.
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