The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course.The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the destination of Anthropology graduates from one university. And the table compares after 5 years of work how much was their
salaries
.
It is clear that
about half of the graduates majored
in Anthropology worked full-time Correct pronoun usage
who majored
job
. Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
On the other hand
, most of them recieved
high Correct your spelling
received
salaries
after working for 5 years.
After finishing their undergradate
degree in Anthropology, 52% of them work full-time, which is significantly higher Correct your spelling
undergraduate
then
Correct your spelling
than
orther
figures. The following Correct your spelling
other
destination
are part-time workers and Change the noun form
destinations
unemplyed
people, with 15% and 12% respectively. The remaining parts are people who worked and Correct your spelling
unemployed
studyed
at the same time, with both 8% and the unknown figure (5%).
Among all the graduates working for 5 years, a large proportion of their incomes were higher Correct your spelling
studied
then
$75000. For freelance consultants and Replace the word
than
government
sector, 80% of their Correct article usage
the government
salaries
were higher than $75000, with 50% of the government sector earned
more than $100000. Wrong verb form
earning
While people
whose Correct word choice
People
salaries
were less than $50000 is
account for little part Unnecessary verb
apply
for
all 3 Change preposition
of
type
of employment, which are 5% for both freelance consultants and Change to a plural noun
types
government
sector and 10% for private companies workers.Correct article usage
the government
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salaries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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