The charts below give information about the diet and general health of two groups of students. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts indicate the data on diet and general health separated by two groups of students.
While
, the table presents the percentage of quantity who are overweight, illnesses in the past year and attendance at class compared by group
A and group
B
.
Overall
, it is clear to see that the figure of pieces who prefer food
with a high-fat content in group
B
is more than students in group
A almost twice as much. Alternatively, the percentage of proportion who chose fruit and vegetables in group
A is more than another group
. Likewise
, the table graph demonstrates that the percentage of BMI and attendance in classes A also
more than in B
.
To begin
with, regarding the consumption of people in group
A it is noticed that most of the students in this
group
are more concerned with food
than group
B
as 23% of them prefer vegetables on the other hand
only 5% of group
B
choose it. Also
with fruit, even only 8% of the fresher in the first group
ate it which is a lower numeral than other kinds of food
but I still more than the second group
only 5%. Although
, both the amount of proportion who choose cereals and fish have the same total. Correct word choice
However
However
, a large difference symbol is junk food
as only 30% of Group
A chose it and 50% of Group
B
selected it.
Moreover
, the table is related to the paragraph mentioned at the top. As 10% of overweight in group
A when compared with another one, it is quite better than group
B
that have an overall
BMI of 20% as well as
, and 90% of people in group
A attend the class meanwhile only 75% of group
B
do it. Furthermore
ordinal of illnesses in the past year in group
B
is more than in group
A around 7Submitted by np.napatping on
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