The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major citites with date opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparison where relevant.
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The table illustrates the details of subway
systems
in six different cities. It is noteworthy that the station with the most passengers
annually is in Tokyo, while
Kyoto has the lowest number of passengers
.
The oldest built underground metro is the one located in London. Despite having the longest route, at 394 km, among the other railway systems
, it is
only Verb problem
can
accomodate
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accommodate
passengers
yearly. The other two systems
built decades after the one in London are in Paris and Tokyo. Tokyo holds the most number of passengers
, accounting for 1927 millions
a year, followed by Paris's railway -- lay on half Change to singular
million
length
of London's route -- carries as many as 1191 Correct article usage
the length
passengers
. Washington DC has another old underground subway system which was built in 1976. It extends to 126 km of route to take on 144 million passengers
.
In contrast
from
the other countries, Kyoto and Los Angeles have Change preposition
to
relative
short routes metro Change the word
relatively
systems
, and accommodate less than 100 million passengers
annually, at 45 and 50, respectively.Submitted by sheillarachmania12 on
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