Many parents consider homeschooling to be way more effective compared to school teaching system. Do you agree or disagree ?

In today's rapidly evolving world, distance learning has become a significant point of discussion. I consider

this

development to be completely positive and I firmly assert that

this

trend provides numerous advantages, encompassing personalized and focused on the

students

and adoptable

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essay will explore those merits,

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addressing valid concerns associated with

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topic. The first reason behind

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stance is that

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child can have more knowledge than other peers and learn rapidly and

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, especially

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not

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appealing things

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as girls, video games, fights and others.

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the progress of children will experience an increase day by day.

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approximately 80 percent of physics like Albert Einstein, Isaac Newton, Michael Faraday and Thomas Edison educated on homeschooling.

Moreover

,

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concept contributes another valuable asset. Flexible

schedule

. You can learn everything which you want at any time in home

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. Cause your curriculum is

adoptable

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, you do not need to look at

lesson

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the lesson

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schedule

and you can easily achieve your aim.

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recent research found that 52

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of American youngsters

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who learn

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in homeschooling learn subjects which

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by themselves so they can enter top

unversities

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universities

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it is essential to recognize that there are challenges, though they do not diminish the

overall

positive impact of learning in distance.

Conversely

, it is important to acknowledge that the lack of communication can be considered a significant drawback.

Students

only can talk with their teachers.

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there are not any

students

for talking. And

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of

students

are

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this

problem. Recent research concluded that

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78

percent

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of homeschooling

students

suffer from the issue during constructing

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future foundation.

Nevertheless

, the benefits of

this

topic are substantial and continue to exert a positive influence. In conclusion, upon examining the various aspects of

this

phenomenon, it can be affirmed that, even though not without challenges, its advantages to society

undeniably

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superior, particularly when considering instances

such

as individual and flexible

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.