Some people believe that children should not be given homework every day, while others believe that they must get homework every day in order to be successful at school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The

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absorbs a lot of

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but

also

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it at home.

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been an increase in the number of voices which claim that

homework

should not be given every day.

However

, other people believe that it is a good way to mobilize kids to work and study,

therefore

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given

daily. Each

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of

these approaches

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both pros and cons. Preparation for

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school

at home is a significant step

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gaining the

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knowledge

. First and foremost, it forces

schoolkids

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to learn and exercise.

For instance

, it is much more developing for children to practice their

school

subject in

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free

time

, rather than play on the computer.

Furthermore

, the

homework

allows students to get a better understanding of things they are learning in the

school

. In order to get a good mark, children have to understand the topic,

thus

, it is more beneficial for them to

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time

at home

practicing

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and trying to become better.

On the other hand

, there have been

also

relevant drawbacks

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such

an approach. The best example

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is the fact that children can feel overwhelmed because of the number of work that

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to be done by them. In fact, kids are already tired after

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school

, so they appreciate

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to relax.

In addition

, a lack of

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homework

can allow

schoolkids

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to develop their passions. The free

time

they gain can be devoted to other activities or hobbies,

consequently

boosting their skills. In conclusion, in my

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it is better to limit the number of

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homework

.

Although

it may have a positive impact on students'

school

grades, their

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can allow them to relax and develop their passions, which I believe is more advantageous.