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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the total number of
minutes
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 of telephone calls in the UK, which are divided into three categories from the
year
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 1995 to 2002. The first
category
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 is the local
category
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. The local
category
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 experienced an
increase
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 in the
year
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 1995 to 1999, it went up from 71
billion
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minutes
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 to 90
billion
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minutes
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 but it experienced a decrease in the
year
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 2000 to 2002, it went down from 88
billion
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minutes
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 to 71
billion
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minutes
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. The second
category
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 is the national and international
category
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, which experienced a stable
increase
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 from the
year
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 1995 to 2002, which increased by a total of 21
billion
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minutes
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 from 1995 to 2002. The final
category
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 is the mobile
category
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.
This
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category
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 experienced a drastic
increase
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 from the
year
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 1995
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2002, in the
year
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 1995 the mobile
category
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 only had around 3
billion
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minutes
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 but in the
year
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 2002, it went up to approximately 48
billion
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minutes
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.
This
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category
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 had its highest
increase
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in
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 the
year
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 2000 to the
year
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 2001, where the
minutes
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 increased from 22
billion
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minutes
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 in the
year
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 2000 and increased to 39
billion
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minutes
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 in the
year
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 2001. In conclusion, The highest total number of
minutes
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 from the three categories in the
year
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 1995 to 2002 is the local
category
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,
while
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 the lowest of the three categories is the mobile
category
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 79%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words minutes, year, category, increase, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 7 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number of minutes
  • telephone calls
  • categories
  • local – fixed line
  • national and international – fixed line
  • mobiles
  • general trend
  • yearly totals
  • significant changes
  • milestones
  • data
  • rise significantly
  • decline
  • steady increase
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • exponential growth
  • over the period
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